A vital point we really wanted people to grasp was the narrative as we really took time trying to subtly getting across the narrative. Most of the feedback said they understood the narrative – however we could have made it clearer. A comment we were pleased with is that all the responses said we followed the conventions of the genre well. A lot of time went into finding our inspirations of the genre and we idolised a lot of people from the genre so we were pleased to find out other people agreed we fitted well into that niche. Peers commented saying it could have been improved by toning it down a bit and using more lip syncing. However the feedback said we didn’t have any syncing issues and they agreed that the editing was fitting with the video and was cut in time to the music. We were pleased with this as one of the key points is the lip syncing and how well it is cut with the music and being in time with the music so to have achieved this was a big success. People commented that after watching it they felt, entertained, randy, scared, excited and confused.
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